Breaking Down the Annotation Paragraph:
There are different ways to construct your annotation. Depending on the instructions given to you, the annotation may include some or all of the following:
Summary: a description in your own words of what this source is about: its topic, arguments, and findings.
Assessment: your opinions on the usefulness and legitimacy of this source. Did you find it to be helpful in proving what you are setting out to prove or argue? Why or why not? Is there a bias in the source to be aware of?
Reflection: how does this source has impact you? Does it help shape your opinion? What did you learn from it that surprised or impressed you? Most importantly, how might this source be used in your paper?
All annotated bibliographies include a summary, but they may or may not have the assessment and reflection.
Here’s an example annotation to help get you thinking about the kinds of sentences, language, ideas, and observations that might find their way into a source annotation.
Hill, T. D., Kaplan, L. M., French, M. T., & Johnson, R. J. (2010). Victimization in early life and mental health in adulthood: An examination of the influences of psychosocial resources. Journal Of Health & Social Behavior, 51(1), 48-63. Retrieved Jan. 15, 2015 from doi:10.1177/002214650936119
The authors found that situations that make children feel less than equal to their peers can harm their mental health as adults. The authors also found that one in four children suffer from self-esteem issues, and one in three live in financial hardship that affects their self esteem. The study provides evidence from a peer-reviewed journal of the effect of poverty on juvenile delinquency: The cycle starts when the child is young enough to be aware of self esteem. The poverty and inequality experienced shape many children into maladjusted teens and young adults. The authors conclude that poverty is a root cause of juvenile delinquency. Important article about causes of delinquency from peer-reviewed journal.
Notice that the first part of the paragraph is a summary. Then the student makes a notation that adds an evaluation of the article and its use. This annotation is similar to the kinds you will write as you evaluate sources that you find for your paper.
Using the above as a model, practice writing a source citation followed by your annotation of it. It should be a source that you are planning to use for an assignment. Be sure to include the following:
- a proper reference citation
- a short summary
- your reaction to the source: distinctive features about it, why it may or may not be useful for you.